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A Season's Dance

Winter's dance was long and she moved very slow She never held you tight, she was always so cold And when she shook her hair the dance floor would be covered in snow And then her icy stare would pierce you and she'd give you a frosty scold But though she seemed at times so mean and undignified The beauty of this lady could never be denied Spring's dance was lively, she let her hair down When she shook her hips there were blossoms all around She was warmer than her sister who wore the icy gown The melody of spring was a beautiful sound Summer was a party girl she danced to rock and roll She was quite romantic and loved those moonlit strolls She loved the fragrant roses and her kiss was very warm Birds would sing when she appeared, enchanted by her charm When she shook her hair, butterflies fluttered out And everyone on the dance floor would twist and shout Autumn was a beautiful girl She danced a little slower as round and round we whirled She had a soul for rhythm and blues And sad songs were her muse She would make her leaves fall all over the dance floor We danced all through the night until her leaves were no more Then her cold sister entered the ballroom with her chilly air of elegance And I sauntered over to this icy beauty and once again we danced To all these lovely ladies I could never say goodbye They will dance forever to melodies upon a changing sky ~ ~ --

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/22/2014 12:41:00 PM
Hi Joseph! Loved this write...the personification, most of all. This dance is never-ending, changing rhythm and beat according to the season. congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:40:00 AM
Joseph, your poem is filled with charm and joy which your wonderful imagery reflects. I love this one and am fav'ing it. Big Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/22/2014 2:00:00 AM
Brilliant write and congrats on the win, Joseph
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Date: 4/21/2014 9:57:00 PM
JOSEPH Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:18:00 PM
Joseph..lovely win....... LOVE --SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:07:00 PM
Joseph, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:49:00 PM
Fantastic, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:46:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 10:05:00 PM
Delightful and vividly descriptive. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:48:00 PM
nicely crafted poem....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:06:00 PM
awww, so sweet, you have now made her the beautiful ice queen, I see!!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/28/2013 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.....
Date: 9/28/2013 8:39:00 AM
glad you liked my seasons' dance. I think this beautiful poem of yours helped inspire me.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/28/2013 8:50:00 AM
thank you Andrea...glad I inspired you...yours inspired me too
Date: 9/24/2013 4:12:00 PM
I just now read what you said to me about a marriage of seasons. Thank you. I think you might like what I came up for in this contest. Just waiting a bit before posting it.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/24/2013 5:15:00 PM
Those were 2 that came to mind I am sure you have much more...I will be looking for it....hugs
Date: 9/22/2013 1:01:00 PM
What a wonderful poem depicting the seasons in all moods. Very creative.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/23/2013 4:34:00 AM
Thank you Monterey
Date: 9/22/2013 8:38:00 AM
- You have color all year round so beautiful, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2013 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Anne
Date: 9/21/2013 11:50:00 PM
wow, I love how you did this one. GREAT imagination for the metaphors. I too am excited to give this one a "whirl!"
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2013 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...I know you'll have a great one.....I love your poems about the seasons... (A marriage of seasons....September)
Date: 9/21/2013 10:10:00 PM
This is very beautiful.I love the personifications of the four seasons..I do believe Autumn wins here : ).A beautiful dance.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2013 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine

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