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A round of golf

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A round of golf

There are vacuum always at a wait
For spectators on the pitch to rate
As players hit ball 
Into holes then fall
King can only be king when he wait.

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:32:00 PM
    I especially enjoyed your final line here. A King has to wait. Good one!! Why don't you make the couplets into one long line?that would make it look more like a limerick!!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:11:00 PM
    So your the Eagle up there. Apologies if I have not looked at your work before, is just so many to get round. I like your limerick here, good luck in the contest. Take care, Regards Richard