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A Romeo and Julliet Story

i open my eyes, i see nothing but you you tell me you had no idea what i was going through with watery eyes you grab my hand and ask me what i was thinking i tried to answer but nothing came out, i felt your heart sinking the last think i remember was crying so hard i couldnt take a breath i opend the alcohol cupboard and drunk until there was nothing left i looked around all confused, im in a hospital bed " you took so many pills it's a wonder your not dead" " how could you do this to me" your voice kept on asking you thought i was happy because of the face i was masking you leave the room to get some tea a note you left " 72 hours i waited by you, would you do the same for me ?" tears started falling i didnt know what to do would i go and finish the job or will i stay by you ? i ran away from the hospital bed and i stood at the edge of a cliff but i couldnt jump, my whole body went still i started thinking why does this feel so wrong, the boy that i felt nothing for, feelings were now so strong i gave you my answer and screamed it so loud everything i felt for you, i was so proud i ran back to find you but it was much to late you died for me so i believed together was our fate so here i lay on top of your body, i put a knife to my heart if i cant be with you in life, we'll be together in death and we will never be apart

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Date: 2/5/2016 3:32:00 PM
Caitlin Potter, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 6/13/2012 3:07:00 AM
Absolutely amazing Caitlin!!! YOU have much talent...It shines brilliantly through this poem!!!Keep them coming please!!!!
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Date: 6/13/2012 2:05:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Caitlin - You have a lovely poem here to day, like it a lot. - Thank you. - Hope you will write, read and comments a lot of poem here with us. - Wish you a lovely day ...love from Norway and me Anne-Lise - Have fun with poetry!!!
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