A Romeo and Julliet Story

i open my eyes, i see nothing but 
you
you tell me you had no idea what i 
was going through
with watery eyes you grab my hand 
and ask me what i was thinking
i tried to answer but nothing came 
out, i felt your heart sinking
the last think i remember was crying 
so hard i couldnt take a breath
i opend the alcohol cupboard and 
drunk until there was nothing left
i looked around all confused, im in a 
hospital bed
" you took so many pills it's a 
wonder your not dead"
" how could you do this to me" your 
voice kept on asking
you thought i was happy because of 
the face i was masking
you leave the room to get some tea
a note you left " 72 hours i waited 
by you, would you do the same for 
me ?"
tears started falling i didnt know 
what to do
would i go and finish the job or will i 
stay by you ?
i ran away from the hospital bed 
and i stood at the edge of a cliff
but i couldnt jump, my whole body 
went still
i started thinking why does this feel 
so wrong,
the boy that i felt nothing for, 
feelings were now so strong
i gave you my answer and screamed 
it so loud
everything i felt for you, i was so 
proud
i ran back to find you but it was 
much to late
you died for me so i believed 
together was our fate
so here i lay on top of your body, i 
put a knife to my heart
if i cant be with you in life, we'll be 
together in death and we will never 
be apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/5/2016 3:32:00 PM
Caitlin Potter, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 6/13/2012 3:07:00 AM
Absolutely amazing Caitlin!!! YOU have much talent...It shines brilliantly through this poem!!!Keep them coming please!!!!
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Date: 6/13/2012 2:05:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Caitlin - You have a lovely poem here to day, like it a lot. - Thank you. - Hope you will write, read and comments a lot of poem here with us. - Wish you a lovely day ...love from Norway and me Anne-Lise - Have fun with poetry!!!
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