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A River View

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A River View

Churning with brown mud, Carp and catfish splash and jump, Lily pads float with white blooms adding more beauty. Tall Elms guard the water’s edge. Wildlife seen daily, Blue Heron fish for supper, Cows drink the water, A raccoon sleeps in the tree, An owl perches on a branch. A river for sport, Canoes float by surveying, Anglers motor by, As the river freezes blue, Snowmobiles skate on the ice. Written by Lee Ramage September 7, 2011 Contest by Francine Roberts “The View” (a Tanka)
* A view from my back yard.*

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 1:24:00 PM
    I am definitely envious of your view, especially as the river freezes and the skaters have the floating time.

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 12:13:00 AM
    My goodness, what a view this is!! Very public it seems but so much FUN and pretty too!! Me likes!

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 9/8/2011 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, nice to hear from you. Yes, we have a beautiful lazy river out back, we are up on a hill so it is pretty private, but everyone loves to sit on our back deck and watch the scene, its better than TV in the summer. Take care Lee
  1. Date: 9/7/2011 8:58:00 AM
    Wishing you the best in the contest Lee. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 9/7/2011 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Carol. Appreciate all the effort you place into Poetry soup, it is what makes it such a nice place. Take care Love Lee
  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:09:00 AM
    You look out on a delightful back yard. Your poem draws it well with charm.

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 9/7/2011 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks John, that's very kind of you to say... wish the raccoon would vacate, he is into everything at nite! Lee