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A Rising Star

Mr Elisha Oitis
Would be of little notice
Were he not the clever creator
Of the handy elevator.

For John Freeman's Giggle contest.

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  1. Date: 8/19/2010 10:42:00 PM
    congrats, Joyce, it was a great entry.

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 6:30:00 PM
    Impressive & enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 11:42:00 AM
    good one, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 8:48:00 AM
    Nice one, Joyce. There's a guy who had his ups and Congrats on your win. Dan C

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 4:51:00 AM
    Congratulations Joyce on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 9:57:00 PM
    Great Poem. Many congrats on your win and thanks for the comments.

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 8:50:00 PM
    Congratulations Joyce, on your win in John's contest :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 6:45:00 PM
    Hey, a new tidbit for me to learn about! congrats on your win, JOyce!

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 5:48:00 PM
    Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest with another awesome write and sweet victory .. enjoy my friend..with luv..caio..

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 5:14:00 PM
    How did I miss this one earlier? It's terrific, Joyce and congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 5:07:00 PM
    I like this form because you can compress history into a quick statement. You have done that here. Thank you for your knd remarks! Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 5:00:00 PM
    Congrats on the win, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 4:59:00 PM
    Congratulations with "Rising Star" being a second place victory for you, Joyce. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 2:50:00 PM
    Great write that is educational and well written...Good luck in the contest that is winners' circle for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 5:07:00 AM
    Nice one Joyce, all the best for John's contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 3:05:00 AM
    A nice clerihew, Good luck, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 2:11:00 AM
    You are also clever, this is so well though out and written, just love it. Harry