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A Rising Star

Mr Elisha Oitis
Would be of little notice
Were he not the clever creator
Of the handy elevator.





For John Freeman's Giggle contest.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2010 10:42:00 PM

congrats, Joyce, it was a great entry.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2010 6:30:00 PM

Impressive & enjoyed,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/18/2010 11:42:00 AM

good one, congrats on your win

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/18/2010 8:48:00 AM

Nice one, Joyce. There's a guy who had his ups and downs...lol. Congrats on your win. Dan C

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2010 4:51:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/17/2010 9:57:00 PM

Great Poem. Many congrats on your win and thanks for the comments.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/17/2010 8:50:00 PM

Congratulations Joyce, on your win in John's contest :) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2010 6:45:00 PM

Hey, a new tidbit for me to learn about! congrats on your win, JOyce!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/17/2010 5:48:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest with another awesome write and sweet victory .. enjoy my friend..with luv..caio..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 5:14:00 PM

How did I miss this one earlier? It's terrific, Joyce and congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love, Carolyn

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 8/17/2010 5:07:00 PM

I like this form because you can compress history into a quick statement. You have done that here. Thank you for your knd remarks! Regards, Gerard.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2010 5:00:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 8/17/2010 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations with "Rising Star" being a second place victory for you, Joyce. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2010 2:50:00 PM

Great write that is educational and well written...Good luck in the contest that is winners' circle for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/17/2010 5:07:00 AM

Nice one Joyce, all the best for John's contest, love Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2010 3:05:00 AM

A nice clerihew, Good luck, Joyce