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A Return Journey by an Auto rickshaw

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A Return Journey by an Auto rickshaw

An auto rickshaw, a carriage
Like a tortoise
Along my obsolete graveled

The auto rickshaw rolls on:
My bucolic 
Mirth of a birth,

The auto rickshaw passes by a
Nuptial hall :a
Stands in the splendor

The auto rickshaw pauses before a
Rural maze :
Career  knocks get

The auto rickshaw, the three
Wheeled, creeps through the 
Scenting textbooks 

The auto rickshaw halts now
On a lap, 
The road is lost in 

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  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:12:00 PM
    Fabiyas, wonderful poem. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list.................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:53:00 PM
    congrats Fabiyas on a top ten victory for this amazing poetry luv for transformation theme .. so outstanding a write luv.. hope u are doing well..

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:19:00 AM
    wow . very intresting depiction. congrats~and well crafte..... sashi

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 5:19:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading..Sara

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 6:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/20/2011 9:28:00 PM
    fabiyas this is wonderful. Many congrats.

  1. Date: 10/16/2011 12:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. Well written

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 8:10:00 PM
    FAB, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my contest,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 7:50:00 PM
    Congrats. Fabiyas on your special winning poem. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 7:46:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on a great third place win with this lovely visual butterfly write my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 12:15:00 PM
    THANKS! FABIYAS... Yes, i'm finding time to read this poem and others... i'm excited with the note you left us poets here on the bottom of your poem... enjoyed the image you display here,,, you visioned it well,,, have yourself a great one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 4:08:00 PM
    splendid sybolisms creating a mood that truly amazes, fabi...:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 1:22:00 AM
    I read your expanation below and that was nice to see. I could tell that you were weaving past with present. what a fun sight, an auto rickshaw!

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 12:52:00 PM
    Great story. I watched each line like a movie. Nice imagery

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 10:15:00 AM
    This a journey from the present stage(father) to the past.Road ends on mothers lap,where I am an infant ,and so my memory is vague there.

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 7:02:00 AM
    This is a unique and pleasurable way to invite us on memory road through a life time of experience and culture to the present foggy time. The past always seems so much more clear because we know what happened then, doesn't it Fabiyas? Thank you for the inspired rickshaw ride and your welcome comment

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 2:07:00 PM
    Great write....very well painted a vivid picture here...smiles...chiquita

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 10:10:00 AM
    Excellent descriptive and expressive work..Reading it was almost like being on an apartment balcony overlooking the scene..Sara