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A Ray of Hope

I see yonder A storm gathering on the horizon And the wind tightening its belt to show its might over the land and the sea. I could feel it in my bones The chill that numbs your body, your mind, As I lay on the good earth - Forlorn, spent and lost, Enduring the elements of Nature. Over me is the foreboding sky, And snuggling beside me to get some warmth is a stray dog for company. Caught between a looming storm And the savage sea, Like an abandoned ship I toss and sway and couldn't steer myself ashore. Like in a dark tunnel I wait it to abate to catch a glimmer of hope, I wait for a solitary star to shine And show me the way! For Russell Sivey's Contest: Enlightenment, Hope and Harmony 04/22/2013

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Date: 5/2/2013 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win . Wonderful poem.
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:43:00 PM
Hello Abdul, :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:50:00 AM
many many congratulations Abdul xx
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Date: 5/1/2013 12:42:00 AM
Brilliant poem as a whole though I especially love when you drew comparison to an abandoned ship. Congratulations, Abdul.
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Date: 4/30/2013 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win! I can see why it was chosen. You took me there, waiting for the storm to pass by - the dog companion was a nice touch. Masterfully done!
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:04:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem of hope. Congratulations Abdul on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:52:00 PM
Nice writing about you and your dog midst the elements. Congratulations on your first place win in Russell's contest. Well done, Abdul. :)
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:22:00 PM
Excellent
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