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A Raindrops Kiss

R aging fire burns inside As another promise is broken tonight. Invisible your feelings become Never should have trusted anyone. Disappointed in myself Ruminating over the events that took place. Over whelmed by harsh words spoken. Perfection was never expected Sending tears in a raindrops kiss, to show how much you are missed.

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Debra Falgout

Date: 9/1/2012 9:15:00 PM

Sometimes we have to go through a little rain to get to the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, anyone whom can write a poem like this can only be a winner, congrats on your win, love debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 11:36:00 AM

CORY, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/31/2012 11:48:00 AM

special..excellent use of the form TOO! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/30/2012 9:13:00 PM

Nciely done Cory. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/30/2012 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations Cory this is a super win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 12:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Cory. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 10:27:00 PM

Cory, your poem is beautiful. Thank you for sharing * Goodnight~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2012 8:40:00 PM

what an interesting way to do the challenge, in this acrostic form about raindrops as a kiss. Good luck in the contest, my friend.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/15/2012 4:21:00 PM

What a sad poem, but so greatly crafted! Wonderful write Cory, Great Work!!

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 8/15/2012 2:24:00 PM

Very well penned, Cory. Enjoyed it alot! hugs- Laila

Carma Sanderson

Date: 8/15/2012 12:46:00 PM

this is beautiful and remarkable, sadly it is the reality of life.... also want to thank you for the help on my poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2012 10:10:00 AM

sweet and lovely cory.. how is my buddy? I am weathering many health storms right now.. a royal battle .. wow.. best wishes in contest.. I have to still check it out luv..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/15/2012 9:12:00 AM

Love this acrostic, great one, thnx for stopping by!! Jag

David Williams

Date: 8/15/2012 8:58:00 AM

Cory, a great acrostic, well done..david

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2012 8:55:00 AM

Oh...sad and beautiful at the same time Cory. - Very well written, wish you good luck in contest and hope for a win for you. - Thank you for visit and comments my poems. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)