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A Rainbows Cry

                                                        I sat under a cloudy sky...
                                                   Looked up to see a rainbow cry...

                                                    The colors ran down to my feet...
                                             In a puddle of sadness it filled the street...

                                                  With just two hands I scooped it up...
                                              And brushed it back on with little disrupt...

                                                    Now all the colors put back in place...
                                                   With a touch and feel of silk and lace...

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  1. Date: 3/5/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Dreamy and lovely to read Michael. The rainbow saviour you are :)

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 9:30:00 AM
    wow wondrous words of imagery and visuals jere Michael.. so lovely your thoughts and creative ability... only a WK can write tender words like this.. JG forever and always luv..xoxo

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 6:54:00 AM
    Oh, I knew this one was grand..congrats on it's success. I can see this one as an opener in your next book...high five, friend! Great write. Hope you are feeling great and your New Year is off to a happenin' start!!

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:49:00 AM
    congrats again for your win. A great poem rich with sensitivity that only you can bring ;)

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 2:11:00 PM
    wonderful winner Michael, debbie could like this in her meter contest. harry

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:11:00 AM
    Awesome write dear poet ! I love this ! Going to mine favz of course ! Have a wonderful weekend Michael....much love, james

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 12:26:00 PM
    congrats on your first place win with this gem.. cory

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 10:21:00 AM
    This is simple and amazing, Michael. Wonderfully written :) Big congrats to you!!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 9:45:00 AM
    congrats Michael luv on first place win for an amazing write my White Knight..luv..

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 5:32:00 AM
    Delightful piece delightful thought gathering a rainbow and putting it back in place. We need more Rainbow fixers in life Michael! Hugs Lizzie

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 3:27:00 AM
    Great write - congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 2:47:00 AM
    Ah like this one, congratulations Michael x

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:55:00 PM
    A very fanciful and delightful write. I like to see rainbows, especially when I can see the full arc.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:46:00 PM
    can you... feel the tears for one my friend... i see rainbows cry..only when i'm in trouble... how ever Michael, i always have the colors stand by my your poem..always yours trully...p.d.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 9:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Michael

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 5:27:00 PM
    beautiful Michael xxx

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 5:07:00 PM
    Love this one Michael, Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:25:00 PM
    this beauty looks so familiar to me but I didn't see my comment below. anyway, Congratulations. I LOVE it.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big win, Michael in Brian's contest, " Any Form, Any Theme " I have enjoyed reading your well-written poem.... a poem filled with imagination and curiosity. Enjoy another victory. God bless and have a wonderful Tuesday. Love, Andrew.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:06:00 PM
    The concept behind this rainbow write is divine! Picturing a rainbow being sad and then weeping its beauty into a large puddle in the street is childlike imagination. Such a refreshing write, Michael. I think it hit my heart more than anything I've read today! Gwendolen