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A Rain of Diamonds

Short article on WATER . From: Aziz M. Tehrani,(Mashhad,Iran.) Azizyours@hotmail.com A rain of diamonds, Recently in a dream I saw the sky was cloudy and it was raining heavily. Strange solid drops were coming down. An umbrella was over my head. I stood still with a fear. First I thought they were hail stones. But,strange to say, they didn't melt at all ! I couldn't move a step forward. By now the solid drops had reached to the level of my eyes. I touched some. They were not wet! I opened my eyes.In my astonishment I saw I was surrounded by a multitude of clear ,valuable and precious diamonds! I could not believe my eyes. Suddenly one of the diamonds spoke to me. " Don't be surprised !! we are drops of water! Only this time we decided to show you our real values! but unfortunately you take no heed ! please don't use us up and keep some for the next generations and God will bless you ."

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:00:00 AM
Aziz, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/2/2015 1:49:00 AM
Aziz -e-Azizam, you're right about water. it is more precious than diamonds.A true environmentalist. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:29:00 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Azoz. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 08/21/2012
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Date: 8/20/2012 8:44:00 PM
wow, what a powerful message was in this poem. So interesting and cleverly done, Aziz. Ok, not sure what you want me to teach you on finding poets, but if you look to your left, you will see new poems - by poets That is a good place to learn the names of poets and see the poems posted today. those with stars by their names are premium members. Many of those will comment back to you! if you need to know poets that will give you feedback, you can soupmail me.
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Date: 8/20/2012 5:24:00 AM
Aziz, this is a beautiful written poem - thank you for sharing it. - Have a lovely new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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