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A Precious Glimpse

Rambling rants of a disturbed mind genius in his day, one of a kind fighting against some archenemy flailing and arguing continuously family visit heartbroken in their eyes, no need to be spoken on a good day he just ignores their presence, one of his chores on a bad day swearing and cursing a painted smile they've been rehearsing the man they knew is long gone but in their soul, his memory shone they keep hoping for a breakthrough a precious glimpse of the person they knew

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Date: 11/27/2012 11:49:00 AM
This poem of yours is relivent to a few things going on with a friend of mine, and it's beautiful, kind of shines a light on a harsh thing. Thanks. Read ;{>
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Date: 11/26/2012 3:22:00 PM
sad,old age conquers,great write Susan
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Susan O'Reilly
Date: 11/26/2012 3:48:00 PM
Hi Richard thanks a mil so glad u enjoyed x

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