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A Pool of Lust

Your body bleeds beauty Dripping grace and splendor Oh! how much i adore your seemliness, Enclosed in your depths... Your elegance shed softly As weary leaves Escaping weeping branches, Scents of luring strewn fragments Caresses my craving, I have eaten from the crumbs of ardor.

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Date: 12/2/2012 7:23:00 PM
Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi , ,,.. it is nice to read this oldie and goody poem.... :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, ..always~ PD
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:38:00 PM
This poem has a lovely translucent quality. I like it very much. Congratulations on your win, Oluwaseun. Well-deserved.
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:40:00 AM
Congratulations Oluwasuen on your placement in John Heck’s “Love is in the Air” contest with this sensual poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Lovingly, Dane Ann.
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Oluwaseun. I can see he had a hard time picking the winners. Some fabulous poetry was entered. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2010 5:38:00 PM
Some very interesting images in this one! A congratulations for your win! Andrea
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Date: 1/16/2010 9:13:00 AM
Oluwaseun, many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 1:44:00 AM
Gorgeous! This is the only word to describe this. Congratulations on your win in John's contest, Oluwaseun. Love, Lainie
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Date: 3/6/2009 5:57:00 AM
Most excellent, unique imagery "dripping grace" "crumbs of ardor" "seemliness" I leked this very very much! Light & Love
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Date: 8/21/2008 10:53:00 AM
I've been out of net Oluwaseun so this is my first opportunity to congratulate you on this well deserved win. All the best - ED
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