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A Poem On a Story From Holy Bible 1

This Poem is dedicated to all my Christian friends on Poetry Soup and else where in the world in the festival month of Xmas. A Poem on a Story from Bible 1 of 2 The Healing at the Pool One fine morning When the Sun was spreading Its refreshing morning breeze On the soil of Jerusalem. 01 All the sick and suffering people Had started gathering On a spot Named as Five Porches At the place, known as ‘Sheep Gate’. 02 They all were here So that they may get a chance To have a dip in the holy water of the pool Of Bethzatha* To get rid of their sufferings and sicknesses. 03 The desire and wish To touch the holy water and To get well soon Had brought them there In spite of their pity deplorable conditions. 04 On that fine beautiful morning Along with the rising Sun Jesus had come to Jerusalem For a religious festival. 05 He was standing on one of the porches And was looking towards those people Who had gathered there With all the love and kindness In his heart for them For all those Who were either sick or blind, Lame or paralyzed Or had sufferings of some other kind. 06 Ravindra Kanpur India 8th Nov. 2012 To be concluded soon in Part 2

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Date: 7/8/2013 4:10:00 PM
love it,,, now part two ;}
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 7/8/2013 8:18:00 PM
Thanks Debbie for liking the Poem. Love and best wishes ......Ravindra
Date: 12/12/2012 4:51:00 PM
Lovely beginning to the story!! Let me see part 2
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:34:00 PM
A lovely reminder Ravi, of a savior who gave so much and yet was rejected. We always learn the hard way, not heeding goodness but seemingly choosing the wrong things so often. You manage to tell the story with much passion. Love, Elizabeth
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 12/8/2012 8:34:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth for your kind words. Shall be visiting your page soon. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

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