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A Pink Rose

My best friend and I Ran barefoot through the garden Stirring the petals Her hair tied back in two braids Her skirt trailed out behind her We sat by the stream With our feet in the water Talking and laughing Until a pink rose I plucked And wove it into her dark braids

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/9/2013 11:28:00 AM
Good after noon ISAIAH ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:37:00 PM
This is a nice story of young romance! Congratulations! RAY
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Date: 4/22/2013 5:36:00 AM
Lovely write Isaiah! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/20/2013 10:34:00 AM
I knew you'd be placed high in Andrea's contest with this gem. Congratulations, my friend. :)
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations Isaiah....beautiful
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:38:00 PM
Isaiah,, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:32:00 PM
Wow! Many congrats my dear friend Isaiah! This is indeed great & wonderful ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:32:00 PM
Isaiah, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/14/2013 8:08:00 PM
I really do adore this one. I think I need to fave it!
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:32:00 AM
Awwww, sweet. If this is for the contest, my very best of luck to you. Nice one, Isaiah. :)
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:35:00 PM
Oh, I love this. It's a beautiful portrayal of childhood innocence. I could see this sweet little scene perfectly in my mind.
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Date: 4/11/2013 5:57:00 AM
I love this one, sweet and tender tanka. oh how funny, I noticed below me just now, Ilene has called it the same thing.
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Date: 4/10/2013 5:42:00 PM
oh, so tender and sweet! i love it!
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Date: 4/10/2013 5:13:00 PM
I can just picture this.......what a lovely and romantic side you have!! Nicely done, Isaiah!!
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:06:00 PM
dare i say another favourite?Ow yep.I love your romantic side of poetry..oozing beauty this friend had inspired.
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