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A Peaceful Beginning

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A Peaceful Beginning

I'm on front porch with cup in hand
As dawn begins to rise
I sip my java as I watch
The sun light up the skies

Distant mountains start to glow
When clouds refract the rays
Yellows, oranges, blues and reds
Paint atmospheric haze

My coffee is a gentle blend
That's mixed with morning breeze
The two combine with natures scent
To put my mind at ease

I love to watch a days new birth
It's way beyond compare
Except for when I watch it end
From back porch evening chair

Rockman   :-)

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:54:00 PM
    I mean this with high please take it this way....But the words you speak in this poem...I could write each and every day...As we get older, we slow down, this I know is tomorrow when you drink your coffee, I send a cheers to you! --I little freestyle rhyme for my dude Rock star! Peace and chicken grease!~JOeY

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 3:22:00 AM
    wonderful feelings protrayed here! nice to read on a Sunday morning. Thanks Susan

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 10:58:00 PM
    Rockman, I see you finished what I should have and your ending is beautiful. Sorry, I just couldn't get around the concept - I see so many others doing it but I guess my head turns to mud with trying. Lovely verse you penned.

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    Date: 8/10/2011 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You suggested nature. A favorite of mine. I created a picture. Put my self in it and followed where it took me. It doesn't always work that way for me. Sometimes I hear a line or think a thought that makes me tilt my head and I take it from there. I have many of those lines written down that I haven't done anything with. But I see them as seeds for future poems.
  1. Date: 8/6/2011 7:05:00 AM
    excellent poem, love it, love the description. good writing