A Path Un Traveled ( Part 4 )

Vultures surround me, glaring at my ebony“ unsaved Soul“, Squawking, waiting for the
“Feast of Death”
The Sallow Sky envelopes me, destroying  all thoughts of  Eternity , a Love tear falls with-in 
my last Breath
Where are the Stars, the Moon, the Sun, LIFE? : I stand alone  scarred and scared ; “I want 
to go Home” 
See the glory of Mother Nature, touch the Robe of Father Time : To Write myself out of this 
Horrible Poem

Inspired By the POEM  “  If you can’t be a poet, be the POEM “  By Dr. Ram Mehta
Dedicated To  “ Dr. Ram Mehta “ ( My Literary Advisor) through His Comments to my Work
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/16/2010 6:27:00 AM
HG ... we just open our hands and let it go, what we see not invisible in our grasp, will fly to become, and become is always becoming ... so we write them, brother.
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Date: 11/8/2010 3:55:00 PM
SOUP MAIL...URGENT ..luv..
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:00:00 AM
this poems strikes almost because of it strange form.tell me, are you experimenting with the structure?
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Date: 11/5/2010 5:13:00 AM
...the horror would be for you to back out of this; what started to be a captivating write ! As the pulse becomes rappid, the writer feels that his write is vapip.. tasteless...but it's not, just when you threw in the last canto. Thanks for the fun ! much love, james
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:54:00 AM
Thanks for the compliments, HG. Nice expressions ... see the glory of Mother Nature, touch the Robe of Father Time
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:42:00 PM
Broodingly beautiful with solid imagery.. thanks for sahring! warmest, nette
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