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I got round to some small changes 17 03 2014 I had intending to make for
a while, I believe it helps the flow, and does not detract from the write, small other changes 9 10 2015
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All round the ring of Kerry’s highways, people point and cry It’s 4 o’clock on the very dot and Mick’s rig is passing by, It has glistening sheens of yellow, with cinnabar spots in red Rich lozenges of orange complete the livery, as this butterfly forges ahead! She’s kissing those dew damp breezes, on a morn like an Irish dream As the sun’s rays like golden spokes Steal silently; through oaks of emerald green. lighting up a meadow’s buttercups, that border a hillside stream. She hauls her load of butter, fresh from the herds of ‘Kerry’s spreads’ To sweeten the taste of a million slices, of European bread! She’s making good time this morning in passing the various towns, By 9 am she makes Letterkenny, to lay her cargo down. Mick checks his trusty wristwatch He needs to be back in Clonakilty; to make a special call For by, begosh and begorrah ‘tis Father’s Day ‘n all. and His sweet Molly will be waiting there, by an ancient rock built wall! So he spins the painted lady round, to take the south west route, Tooting to folks he recognises; as along that road he shoots. At 1 o’clock he’s made it back, and parks the painted lady up He wanders up the dusty track; just a Dad in working gear Straightening an aching back, now his destination’s near He searches the milling kids all around, many colours their faces show And then he picks out his Molly. as those raven curls she throws! She runs to greet him at his call, raising her face to be kissed And she had chosen a painted lady, sure.. He felt how he had been missed! He swings Molly up on high and they head back to the farm She showers him with sweet butterfly kisses As rabbles of the creatures unravel, in clouds and colours of charm! NB the Painted Lady is an Irish species of Butterfly

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Date: 12/29/2015 5:44:00 PM
JOE, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/29/2015 7:28:00 PM
All thanks for the wonderful comment Skat, and to tps for the selection.'
Date: 12/20/2015 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Joe on your winning this contest. Very clever write. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/19/2015 8:46:00 AM
For me this is truly one of the best! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/18/2015 11:08:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely poem Joe .. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 6:51:00 PM
Kudos, Joe, on this brilliant butterfly turn. I love the way you put the thoughts on the road to great ending. Well deserved win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:31:00 PM
hey, I remember seeing this one before. glad to see you on the winners list with it. Big congrats to you and merry Xmas season.
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Date: 12/18/2015 1:51:00 AM
HELLO JOE, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/18/2015 2:09:00 PM
Hi P D, thank you for the kind wishes..'
Date: 12/18/2015 12:28:00 AM
Rich in imagery and oh so wonderfully irish. I probably appreciate it more because (a) my Mother was a Dublin lass, and (b) Clonakilty black puddings are the best in the world. Now I'm hungry. Great write, Joe, well done. regards, Viv
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/18/2015 2:11:00 PM
Hello Viv, thank you for taking the time to congratulate me..'
Date: 12/17/2015 7:25:00 PM
JOE, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
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Date: 12/18/2015 2:12:00 PM
Hello Skat, and thank you for considering placing this one..'
Date: 11/7/2013 6:44:00 PM
the picture paint is very quaint, but flows well on the page, the writer feels every bump, them words are wisely staged ....
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:41:00 AM
Second time through is even more charming. The painted lady was so delicate and simple as I remember, and not like the monarch or tiger swallowtail. This goes back to childhood so beautifully. I love childhood, the very most creative time of a person's life. Love, daver
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Date: 9/24/2013 2:16:00 PM
Soft and simple beauty Joe - a delightful connection to natural missions of joy - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:07:00 AM
EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING
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Date: 9/22/2013 5:24:00 AM
Joe this is so charming I love it and the touch of Irish brogue makes it perfect wonderful write Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:40:00 AM
Good afternoon Joe, stopping in with a smile and a hello... hope to hear from you next time you are on the soup..xox..Linda
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Date: 7/24/2013 12:15:00 AM
In answer to your question. Yes, I would dearly love to be the female Stephen King but I just can't seem to start a novel. (but definitely it would be horror)
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Date: 7/15/2013 9:47:00 AM
enjoyed the development of this piece with all its scenic, intricate detais.. a winner for me!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for looking in on me. Just had a defibrillator installed to regulate my heart. The process was a lot more severe than I'd imagined, so won't be doing much soup for a couple of weeks. Love, daver
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Date: 7/3/2013 8:05:00 PM
The most ambitious poem I have seen by you. Excellent work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/2/2013 2:46:00 PM
Beautiful butterfly and interesting work that you have penned..Is this a train that is painted like a the butterfly or is it a carriage or is it a wagon like maybe a delivery wagon?..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by and taking time to write a review of my work..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2013 1:38:00 AM
In this entry there are many areas with which one can identify. Bright and creative is the poet that wrote this. You are indeed headed for the winner's circle.... Jake
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Date: 6/30/2013 7:05:00 PM
This is an exceptional piece of work. I will be shocked if it is not on the winners list. You have my respect, a very talented writer you are.
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:42:00 PM
Joe, this is a stunning portrait of the painted lady and a whimsical tale all rolled into a fantastic poem. great write !
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Date: 6/28/2013 11:50:00 PM
Hello, Joe. Are you ready for the fourth of July?
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:10:00 AM
I remember the painted lady, a very delicate, small butterfly, and the monarch, tiger swallow tail and others. Enjoyed. LOve, daver
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