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A Not So Good Thanksgiving

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A Not So Good Thanksgiving

Thanksgiving is a day to be grateful,
Not a day to be grumpy or hateful.
But a burnt pumpkin pie,
And a turkey that's dry,
Might make it hard to be elateful.*

*(I realize elateful is not a word, but I claim poetic

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Poetic license granted! I like this one for it's sense of whimsy. I'm not sure of the rating system: is 7 good or is 1 good? So I'll just say it was good!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:04:00 PM
    poetic license is very liberal with limericks, Kim, since it's all about humor. This is a very good one you did!! I happen to like my turkey meat white and dry. hahaha GREAT limerick.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:36:00 PM
    Thanks for this one it this funny. Many blessings. Thanks for my win and reading my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:30:00 PM
    funny and clever (and i love your new word!)