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A Night Talk

A Night talk beautiful Mood embraced the silence my paradise threw a talk when humans slept and dreamt weakness missed fondling verge liver lips invited a night talk confusions apprehensions disappointments dangling wistfully waiting shelter bolster lashes day waiting for arms of love to maintained a talk more closely concentrated over night my timeless hope you dissolve my dusty soul a cradle i need with peaceful wings waiting you there for another night talk destiny to new destinations ~(c) sukmawati Komala ~ 28 April 2013

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2014 7:25:00 AM

While others sleep you wander in your own fantasy, relishing the silence around you. Lovely poem, Sukmawati. // paul

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 4/9/2013 6:03:00 PM

bittersweet and lovely....I especially like the line "a cradle i need with peaceful wings....

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/7/2013 2:42:00 PM

This poem is beautiful. I like how each stanza has a whispering, musing quality..it's very dreamy and free-floating but comes together so well.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/3/2013 10:16:00 AM

this is amazing poetry, sukmawati, you sure take destiny to my destination... so thought provoking, so precious is your poetry....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2013 2:34:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your visit was appreciated..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2013 8:27:00 AM

This is an interesting way to describe a night talk. It sounds as if you are waiting to talk to an angel! I have been having insomnia lately and just end up talking with myself! It's Easter here in the US this morning. Does anyone celebrate it where you are? In case it's true, I will tell you Happy Easter!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2013 5:28:00 AM

.... you have to sleep at night, dear Sukmawati .... - A beautiful poem! - Have a nice day, hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 3/31/2013 4:46:00 AM

What a beautiful night talk Sukmawati. :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, Yanny