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A New for What was Taken


I don’t fancy what God did to 
I had my loss just yesterday
Last memory about her was 
she smiled at me
Couldn’t believe she had gone 

Her life was to bargain
With this pure soul I have in 
Until I see her again
I promise I’ll protect him from 

One life was taken, after one 
for the forsaken
Life as it is, we have to 
of what it has given

dinda minardi

* many doesnt know what this 
poem try to convey: it is a 
poem about husband's loss of
his wife who dies laboring.

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Dinda, , , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 1:22:00 PM
    so sad ...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Dinda

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:56:00 AM
    A sad experience is an understatement. Congrats on your win in the contest. BG

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:37:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Dinda !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:33:00 PM
    who was this that you lost, Dinda? You have written in a way that shows a mature acceptance of God's plan.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Death is only a momentary experience till we rise at the resurrection. Till then, let the memories you have give comfort dear one. Sometimes our loss is another's gain.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:15:00 AM
    Sorry for your lost Dinda... some day (maybe) we meet last poem is about my lost.oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 5:17:00 AM
    life have many curves can be sweet can be bitter .... nicely written Dinda

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:42:00 AM
    if this is from RL, I am sorry for your lost Dinda. you conveyed deeply your emotions with a surprising distant feeling. emotional write wonderfully done

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 7:32:00 PM
    Yes life has amazing pain and amazing joys- loved your poem, may joy soften your pain, love, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 11:26:00 AM
    A poem about some kind of separation I think....a touching write.Thanks for your so many sweet comments at my pages.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:22:00 AM
    When life is over we go to heaven. That is if we did what God wanted us to do.