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A New Day

Fingers of dawn bring dewdrops falling,
Tears for a brand new day;
A rose coloured sky brings the lark calling
A song she sings to bright May.
The lilac is bending in her royal color,
Lost in the purple of night;
Star shine is softer and duller,
A new day brings life's delight.

Open the window and bend above me
Dearest red rose, my sweet song;
Shed your thorns if you love me
For nights without you are so long.
The day is ours, and daylight is breaking
Sweet drowsy eyes of grey;
You won't question an early waking
When the wings of night fly away. 

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  1. Date: 12/24/2011 6:26:00 AM
    Loved the line 'Shed your thorns if you love me', and I agree. Thanks, my friend. Wish You Happy Christmas day and Happy New year and God bless you from every spheres in your life with which you can have sweet smiles all the rest seconds, minutes, hours, days and years. bl

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 9:18:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 10:15:00 PM
    So many lovely images, Elizabeth. What a bright new day.

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 8:10:00 AM
    Aren't sunrises/sunsets the best? Ever driven during one? Especially a sunrise? They can really hit home. Just like this piece did...

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 7:35:00 PM
    this is beautiful ! you captured it perfectly

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 4:20:00 PM
    Sweet poetry - and thanks for your fine comments! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 10:09:00 AM
    typos:enjoyed=enjoued, keep=kepp

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 10:08:00 AM
    enjoued this morning read. Kepp the ink from splattering and in eloquence continue your pen to flow. Best regards, Lucinda aka Cindy

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 4:45:00 PM
    There's so many days we have in a life time. And too many words about lost love that rhyme. Hearts unrequainted will stir in the night. If you ask me, it just isn't right.

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 4:05:00 PM
    What beautiful verse. It reminds me of my garden in Summer. Great imagery and so well put together. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 2:25:00 PM
    Feels great reading this beautiful piece, good to start the day with.

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 7:20:00 AM
    this pretty poem is filled with promise and beautiful imagery. You have written it in such a manner so as to allow one to be fully immersed in it . Just lovely, Elizabeth. Thank you for your soup mail.

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 11:01:00 AM
    Very Beautifully penned. I enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing,ELIZABETH

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 11:01:00 AM
    Good morning,,E.W.,, a lovley way to start any day... re-reading this poem,,, thanks,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 10:57:00 AM
    This is so lovely. Truly poetic perfection. Loved every well penned verse. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 8:44:00 AM
    what a beautiful first line to start this poem, finished with an elegant last line. oh readers should take note , you have got to capture imagination in the beginning like this, if you wish to be read. excellent write Elizabeth.

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 6:52:00 AM
    Good morning! Tony

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 3:19:00 AM
    Once again another great write. I enjoyed.

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 10:24:00 PM
    you are a wonderful poet Elizabeth ... moving with the sadness to happiness... Or happiness too delight... Enjoying tour write...p.d