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A New Day

Luna fades to dream As the sleepy Earth's eyelids Begin to flutter...

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/17/2010 9:48:00 AM

Dear Michele, Congratulations on YOUR Super Souper Featured POEM "A New Day" such a Perfect Haiku, in form and in the message in my Favorites it goes I will read more of YOU as YOU have impressed me so with this great Pen ALWAYS...HG

Milton Toran

Date: 1/15/2010 8:15:00 AM

Each line blends perfectly with the title. This haiku is without a doubt one of the best I've ever read. Congratulations to you!!---Milt

Debra Robillard

Date: 1/13/2010 11:39:00 PM

I loved this one, Michelle

Sue Mason

Date: 1/12/2010 12:14:00 PM

Beautifully done, Michele.

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 2:01:00 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele >> James

Elaine George

Date: 1/11/2010 11:01:00 AM

Beautiful, dreamy Haiku, Michele. Thank you for once again sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele. Love, Carol

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 1/10/2010 5:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

P Sheart

Date: 1/10/2010 3:11:00 PM

Michele,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

Date: 1/10/2010 12:55:00 PM

Such a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Much captured in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Janette Fisher

Date: 1/10/2010 11:30:00 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette