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A Murmuring Brook

A murmuring brook of love songs runs along my life's path every night I go near it and let my heart take a bath. © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) ========================================= Placement : 2nd ( Sept 2013 ) Contest: What makes you tick Sponsor: Seren Roberts

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/29/2013 1:44:00 PM

Hi there thanks so much for stopping by my verses! Hope all is well with you? Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/26/2013 2:25:00 AM

kashi.. 2 weeks on leave?.. come over or i might as well get lost as well..:) huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/26/2013 2:25:00 AM

kashi.. 2 weeks on leave?.. come over or i might as well get lost as well..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 11:40:00 PM

kash, you are here? where can I find this contest where you say I got an HM? is it at some haiku site?

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/24/2013 1:56:00 PM

Ow gee you definitely make me tick which such beauty.Congratulations and hope to read more new masterpieces of yours soon.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2013 10:47:00 AM

kashi.. got more?.. still under the weather, what a soup charade...yucky!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2013 5:41:00 PM

Kash, Good Grief is for the Grief contest! Of Black eyed Susan! you should try.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2013 8:03:00 AM

amazing poetry, Kash, congrats...

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2013 7:33:00 AM

congratulations Kash, .........SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2013 10:11:00 AM

Kash, , congratulations:) In Seren's "what makes you tick" contest... always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2013 10:10:00 PM

yours was so poetic, Kash. Congrats on its win.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/16/2013 6:23:00 PM

I love it Kash, I feel relaxed already. Congratulations.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/16/2013 2:32:00 PM

Your words paint a beautiful picture, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2013 12:18:00 PM

ohhhh, another crown for you, kashi... congrats!..:) huggs

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/15/2013 1:57:00 PM

Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest ....Seren

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2013 2:05:00 PM

now i can breathem kashi bud... been waiting for your writes and yes, this compensates for your absence on this page.. you sweeten the poetic pot!... love it!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2013 12:40:00 AM

ahhh, finally, a poem, short but so sweet!!!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/12/2013 12:59:00 AM

Excellent write Kash! I love the imagery- the songs that fill your path. Well penned.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/11/2013 7:46:00 AM

Oh KASH! This is absolutely amazing! I was so curious to know what makes you tick! You will do well!!! VERY well! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2013 6:21:00 AM

This is a very beautiful and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this incredible piece! What a fantastic verse, Great Work!!