A Monk

Silently The monk stood watching From the path As I passed I noticed it had no face… Trembling, I ran home For Kim’s Shadorma contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:45:00 AM

JACK, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2012 2:42:00 PM

((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2012 7:01:00 AM

Scary, what does it all mean... interesting. Well done, congrats on your win. Lee

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 9:01:00 PM

Very eerie. I'd run too! Good write, Jack! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

Kathryn Collins

Date: 8/26/2012 8:49:00 AM

Did he have a scythe? I love this . It's so creative. love, Kathy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2012 8:52:00 PM

For some reason, I am thinking this is a tree or something!! Or was it simply a ghost monk? Very interesting shadorma, my friend. well, my goal was to be off by 9, so I have around five min. to go!! see ya!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2012 5:16:00 PM

Scary...Good reason to run..Reads like a winner...Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Have a great eve..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/24/2012 3:13:00 PM

Well you never know what strange things are lurking out there Jack; hope you shock your way to a win with this:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/24/2012 3:05:00 PM

What a tremendous write my friend! I believe that I would have run home as well! I really enjoyed this awesome poem that you have written! Great Work!!