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A moment not yet

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A moment not yet

My eyelids close as softly
As a feather floats
To the ground in
The gentle wind of your
Breath on my forehead
My cheek warm on your
Thigh and cascading sunlit
Hair sweeps across your legs
Safely I sleep and you are
There to catch my dreams
To see right through them
As translucent wishes
Float like bubbles and 
You guard my slumber
My head in your lap
With my sleepy smile

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  1. Date: 2/12/2010 10:15:00 AM
    Blythe, Congratulations, on your poem feature this seek. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 12:06:00 PM
    Congrats on this selection. This reads without taking a breath, kind of perpetuum mobile. I like it very much for that reason. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/8/2010 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James

  1. Date: 2/8/2010 10:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Blythe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/8/2010 6:14:00 AM
    Many congrats on your fine featured piece. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 2/7/2010 4:52:00 PM
    Great rhythm to this excellent writing, Blythe. Welcome to PoetrySoup and congratulations on having your writing featured this week!!

  1. Date: 7/29/2009 4:39:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Melody. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/28/2009 3:24:00 AM
    Beautiful dreamy write Melody>>James