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A Moment Not Yet

My eyelids close as softly As a feather floats To the ground in The gentle wind of your Breath on my forehead My cheek warm on your Thigh and cascading sunlit Hair sweeps across your legs Safely I sleep and you are There to catch my dreams To see right through them As translucent wishes Float like bubbles and  You guard my slumber My head in your lap With my sleepy smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2010 10:15:00 AM
Blythe, Congratulations, on your poem feature this seek. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/9/2010 12:06:00 PM
Congrats on this selection. This reads without taking a breath, kind of perpetuum mobile. I like it very much for that reason. Love, daver
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Blythe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:14:00 AM
Many congrats on your fine featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/7/2010 4:52:00 PM
Great rhythm to this excellent writing, Blythe. Welcome to PoetrySoup and congratulations on having your writing featured this week!!
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Date: 7/29/2009 4:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Melody. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2009 3:24:00 AM
Beautiful dreamy write Melody>>James
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