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A Message To Heaven

i wait at night, look for your star i feel you close, but bodys so far taken away, removed all your pain your words and your wisdom, were the things that i gain long late night chats, getting blind drunk sharing a beer, or smoking some skunk i miss all those things, i miss how we talk i miss when you used me to lean on to walk i miss when us kids were just little nippers or when you stunk the house out when cooking your kippers i miss when we went driving for hours on end you wernt just a dad you were my best friend laughing and joking, like when mum burnt the gravey or the storys you told bout being young in the navey the tears and the crying, the shouting and screaming and now that your gone i wake hoping im dreaming the quick witted mind, but you were sometimes a knob but now your at peace, reunited with rob you once told me a secret, when i was eleven so god bless you dad, is my message to heaven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2010 6:14:00 AM
Line six....hehe me too..... It is hard to cope with the death of a family member especially the ones we are closest too.... The pain will fade, keep your head up.....:JP]
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:01:00 AM
We truly miss the ones we love, hopefully you will be reunited after life.
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