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A Lover's Tale

her beauty reminds me of a splendid lake so soft and sweet that cannot fake her lips so sweet like berry cake i knew just then i don have to bake her hips and curves were a perfect make so perfect all kings would want to take i'll beat all odds for her gentle sake my love for her can never quake if this is a dream i dont want to wake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/9/2013 7:37:00 PM
Oh, such a story, makes my heart ache for a man called Jake! I'm being silly; I think you made great use of you rhyme sceme and the story too. Loved it!
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:38:00 AM
Hi, Muhammad, your poem A Lover's Tale just made a pleasant read! I enjoyed it immensely. I must say keep up with your end rhymes, and the rhythm too.
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Date: 11/22/2012 3:20:00 AM
wonderfull rhyme Muhammad, love Elizabeth
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Muhammad Najeeb Momoh
Date: 11/22/2012 3:29:00 AM
i want to say a big thank YOU cos now i feel brand NEW i beg to take an abrupt FLEE with lots of love from ME..... THANK U

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