A Love Pep Talk
From the outset, I felt love and bliss in you
But then, momentarily we slowed down of this feelings
As we tread of our faith, can they be considerate, understanding and caring?
The moon finally is at our side, brighter, guiding and consoling
Although our minds they have their own faults and reservations.
We’ll dance with the music naturally, willfully strong for our cause
We knew, our love is destined and wrapped up as one, we promised!
Both of us are survivors, battered in many ways
Threats along the way true and indiscernible
But we should hold on together, love each other the more
While it’s worth loving each other, we should be careful and vigilant
Our love is for eternity
Falling out of love we cannot dare sacrifice
For truly this love is great!
Entered in a contest sponsored by:
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Copyright © Dalila Agtani | Year Posted 2012
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