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A Longing

Yet still my heart beats for days now blurred 
Two beats were counted, only one was heard 

We are not even a drop of rain, just vapour 
United to be once more, no clouds can conjure 

All love all liking now lost… forever! 
Dreams and memories, time tries to severe 

Like dew-bespangled flowers alone I weep 
The spray turns to rain, colours never keep 

No longer will I drink your silvery voice 
Destiny meant, I could not make a choice 

A longing and thirst for you I cannot quench. 
The cup floating in air, unable to reach. 

©Holly P. Moore Lines 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 12
    January 2013

©26/1/2013 Lines 1, 3, 5, 7, 9, 11

A collaboration with my great friend, David Willams, who has not judged me through my tragedy and encouraged me to continue to write.

Two minds thinking in sequence, I dedicate to my son. 

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  1. Date: 5/31/2013 10:24:00 PM
    Nice poem

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:25:00 PM
    that's great to know this one was done in collaboration with David. He is a tremendous poet here at Soup. I enjoyed the theme of this poem and its imagery!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Holly; I love your poem and no one should judge you. There is always something that inspire us to write. You have your inspiration. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Holly, this is absolutely gorgeous in every way :) it is so nice of David to have been so non-judgemental and motivated you to keep doing what you do best! Thank you so much for sharing this :)

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:20:00 AM
    this is incredibly sad, full of emotion and a fine example of great poetry, thank you.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 12:02:00 PM
    this is beautifully woven together and very touching...

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Holly my friend ... such a lovely poem about longing, things that were and will never come back. - No one can "judge" others because grieve This is your grief and we as human beings can try to make it easier for you .... comfort and light up your day. - Sending you a big warm hug, Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)