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A Long Walk

From dusk till dawn walked all alone for hours the walk got shorter From dawn till dusk walked with others for hours the days just kept getting longer and longer From dawn till dawn walked alone again time stopped From dusk till dusk walked with others who were here feels like forever, void of light in the ichor of vapid obsidian From hell to heaven walked with God never been happier, though this walk seems longer than all the rest my feet calloused and my heart torn asunder, damages done, wish me all the best. Now, why in the hell did I forget to buy some new shoes?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/28/2012 12:10:00 PM
new shoes give you blisters; old shoes are the best so walk on my friend; it keeps you fit and you probably find the odd poem on the way! Great poem to enjoy! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 4/24/2012 12:41:00 PM
Well written.I enjoyed this much.
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