A Lonely Holiday

I feel so all alone, My Heart on the other side of the country Never seeing, Never touching the mirage of my Dreams Never hearing the Voice of my Angel, her Poems : a vocal Hypnotism Pulling me into a deeper desolate devestating Loneliness "Tidings of Comort and Joy" Wish I had some of that "WEED" My Comfort : " Over the Rockies, through the hot desert sand My Heartbeat :Far,far away; across this vast beautiful land "Joy To The WORLD The LORD Has Come" Am I part of this world?? Why did HE not see me? How is it with HIS Heart : HE couldn't feel mine? Has my life become no more than an imaginary opaque silhouette I am so transparent. you can read the name on my Heart " Barbara Jean " "Hark The Herald Angels Sing" to deafened ears, to eyes blinded by Love Never seeing, Never knowing Companionship, togetherness : Forever "Oh Come All Yea Faithful, Joyful And Triumphant" I'm last in line!! Barbara Jean , hold my Heart tight , wait for me until we entwine in Eternity

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 6:27:00 PM

Was this another of those "challenges" you told me about, Daniel. It is very thought-provling and, what is the name of that, when it's like reading a flow of thoughts? I forgot now! WEll, thanks for all your comments today, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/14/2010 5:27:00 PM

HG you have quite the romantic heart as is witnessed in this write. Cool! _Robert

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/3/2010 5:49:00 PM

Very thought provoking. I hope the new year brings great friends.

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/1/2010 9:54:00 AM

Very nice.I am still waiting for your challenge. I have done my part by writing You Have To Have Faith.You wanted me to answer in a comment what the poem To Whom it may Concern,meant.It means just what is says.I posted a Song called Sissy's Song.It also is meant for me Hope you have a Happy New Year.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/29/2009 4:53:00 PM

An amazing poem, HGarvey. It saddens the heart. "Her Poems: a vocal Hypnotism" has charmed me. Thanks for your words of encouragement for my poem Do not Knock that has won at the semi-finals and is being featured this week. Happy New Year. May 2010 see bejewelled poetry flowing from your pen. -Mohammad

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/29/2009 8:13:00 AM

I am going to take your challenge today.I write a love heart felt poem,and you write one about suicide.It might take me abit because i have to think of every word.It won't come to me naturaly.I will post it when I am done.Hope you had a good christmas.

Date: 12/26/2009 9:28:00 AM

HG, I hope you are smiling today. Creative use of song titles in this poem. We got snowed in for Christmas and weren't able to make it to my parents. At least the four of us were together warm and safe. Happy New Year! Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/25/2009 10:56:00 PM

HGarvey - Very deep poem my dear friend - Saddens the heart because you deserve all the love in he world HG- You'll have to excuse me I'm so tired I'm seeing double - Almost feels like I been smoking some of that "WEED" you were speaking of - But alas - no no no I don't smoke it no more/ I'm tired f waking up on the floor - Old song went something like that - My prayers are with you always HGarvey - mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/25/2009 7:43:00 PM

Such beautiful words, HG, but rather sad ..why?.. expressions from the depth of emotion and missing those we so loved in live and still love beyond is important to remember... u are a loved soul, HG, don't ever forget it... the Lord has put all your tears in a bottle... Scripture tells us so... and He alone understands your pain and loss .. we just never understand the why of it all .. but, my beau, a new year is approaching... happy thoughts now.. luv u.. "Sweetheart"