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A Lonely Departure

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Below is the poem entitled A Lonely Departure which was written by poet Valmiki Lutchmedial. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A Lonely Departure

Yet again, the experience taunts me,
but a willing sacrifice, determined and well thought of.
Suitcases seem heavy, the clothes too much to wear,
and the pain I cannot bear.

Day after day, reminded of that day,
I wish that day never came.
Is it worth it?
Maybe, but my happiness lives in the heart of another.

At last that day has come,
sometimes, as the day leading up, words meander around unspoken thoughts.
Home at last,
I say, I am there and back again.

Honestly, what I know is wisdom,
Inseparable hearts, cohesive bodies and the softest lips I have ever kissed.
There can be no departure,
but this day it feels like that


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  1. Date: 9/1/2011 7:03:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Valmiki. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 9:49:00 PM
    Interesting expressions on the feelings of love, Valmiki

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 3:14:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv as this gem...

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 1:39:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Valmiki. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 11:23:00 AM
    we all fall under the spell of love, a lovely write. i can dig this.