A Lone Buzzard

a lone buzzard flies stark contrast to blue bell skies.. winter's north breeze lifts

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/5/2013 12:20:00 PM

Oooh! This one is wonderful. It paints a very vivid and almost chilling, picture. Sensational and splendid alike! Always, Laura

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/5/2013 5:33:00 AM

wonderful poetry Sara...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2013 11:16:00 PM

stunning imagery. I love when you haiku this way!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/4/2013 9:27:00 PM

Wow, this is a truly wondrous and enlightening write my friend! You wrote this like you saw this buzzard...I bet you saw one that morning! In that freezing cold too nonetheless! We have at least 4 inches of snow on the ground right now and the roads aren't very good...I hate that! I haven't seen many birds this winter though, they all migrated or are hiding, trying to stay warm I'm sure! Anyway this is a spectacular poem! I loved reading it this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!

Donna Jones

Date: 2/4/2013 4:56:00 PM

This makes you feel like you are there in person! Beautiful

Gail Debole

Date: 2/4/2013 1:52:00 PM

Hello Sara - I can see the images clearly, and feel that breeze. (It's in the 20's where I live.) Enjoyed your poem! - Gail