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A Lifetime Tradition

Grandfather relaxed
While I cleaned his grimed toenails—
He was a tugboat captain.
It was tradition,
As soon as he fell asleep,
I painted his toenails red.

© February 22, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Sedoka me any subject 	
Sponsored by: Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:04:00 PM
    DANE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:31:00 PM
    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your win..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 9:30:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 7:35:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Dane Ann! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 11:01:00 AM
    great write Dane Ann...enjoyed it a lot. Congrats!!

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 10:25:00 AM
    hehe, this is so cute Dane Ann! Congratulations on your win ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 8:53:00 AM
    Wwwwwwaaaaaaahahahhahha! This is hilarious! Poor grandpa! : ) Thanks for sharing this lovely memory, Dane Ann! And congratulations on your well deserved winning! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 7:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 10:37:00 PM
    another great write, dane... you rule and congrats on your great win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 7:18:00 PM
    congrats Dane Ann on a dynamic win for this interesting Sedoka luv..

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 10:56:00 PM
    LOL. I would have done the same! If this is true, what an awful tradition. I would find a podiatrist who makes housecalls. A fun read tonight...thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda

    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 2/24/2012 3:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is true...and it was a tradition...his children, as I understand, did the same thing. I was taught at a very young age...of course by my grandmother. LOL It was NOT an awful tradition, though. He always laughed heartily. And he did NOT TAKE IT OFF! When he was out on the boat working, sometimes for weeks at a time, his red toenails reminded him of how much we loved him and how much fun we always had when he was home. When he died, he had red toenails, which my grandmother insisted were to be left red. I had painted them red. Granddad had been my favorite person on earth.