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A Letter To My Father

You broke my heart
You shattered my dreams
You've missed almost everything
Now your back and I can't think
I fear my thoughts that you might leave
Gone again can't be found
Years gone by and not a sound
Now your here, I hope to stay
I love you dad in every way
Please promise me your here to stay
And
Will not loose another day

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Belinda Parish Date: 2/7/2009 9:44:00 PM Absolutely beautiful write. Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 8/29/2008 6:27:00 AM Your Dad is a good man who knows he's made some bad choices as we all have in our lives. He's an inspiration for the underdog. God Bless both of you. A daughter's love is one of life's greatest blessings. Vince Login to Reply

Deneen White Date: 8/24/2008 8:20:00 PM hi it is always heart-wrenching to read these kind or writes, yet it's necessary and a catharsis, my father is still alive yet you would never know it because he never was around, hopefully you and your father can mend your fences and he can be the father that you desire, great write, take care D-nyce Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/23/2008 5:27:00 PM this was a heart felt piece of poetry and praying that everything works out ok, this was a great poem. Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/23/2008 7:23:00 AM Hi Honey - As hard as these words are for me to read I'm glad that you are constructively expressing your feelings. As I stated in one of my books it was your love that helped me become the father I am for Michaela. I love you with all my heart honey and if I could do it over I would. Love you and great job expressing your feelings, left me in tears - God Bless hon, Dad Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 8/23/2008 5:39:00 AM oh I'm sure your dad will stay in touch one has to grow and love thy self before he can love another and knowing your dad he wants to make it right now just knowing he is back should make that light shine alittle brighter and think you are still number 1 and has a little sister now you can share with children can bring together with just their smiles keep on sharing and beleiving it will happen once again Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 8/23/2008 4:59:00 AM Another emotional outpouring of love. Father and daughter have such a special bond. Beautiful write. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/22/2008 5:45:00 PM I pray that this reunion will bring both of you such a tight connection, that there never, ever be doubts again. Blessings to you both. A tender poem, Sarah.......Your friend in poetry...Carrie Login to Reply