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To My 16-Year Old Self

Hello, I’m you, and you just wrote this poem! You’ve written hundreds more! One day you’ll find A place that poet friends world-wide call home. Creatively, you’ll exercise your mind. Start now to hone your writing skills, and when you go for that semester in Madrid, you won’t learn Spanish well enough! Please, then, return to Spain! I know you’ll wish you did. You needn’t try to get through college fast. Get work in Spain. Learn from experience. Don’t marry quite so young. Life is a blast. Try things you really love. Gain confidence! There’s coming in the 80’s - VCR, and later on will come the internet. Invest in them. I think you could go far, Money matters. You just don’t know that yet! Life will be nice, but long before you age, You’ve got to save, or it will be too late. You need a pension plan - advice most sage! But cash it out before two-thousand-eight! For one brief week soon coming, there’s a guy, and no one like him will you meet again! He’ll go back home, but three years later try to look you up, but you’ll be married then. . . Could things with him have worked? How can you know? But you and I so seldom take a chance! With what I’ve told you, let’s see how things go. . . Will you change fate and opt out for romance? For the What Would You Say Poetry Contest of Alexis Y

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Date: 5/22/2016 6:04:00 AM
Found this one looking way back in your pages. Again, this is like listening to the poet recite while I am actually reading! Love the whole thing. ...Fran
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Date: 11/9/2015 10:27:00 AM
Oh wow...It's only now that I got to read this! Really enjoyed this write, Andie. Makes one wonder of what could have been :-) Congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:26:00 PM
Superb win Andrea with this awesome write... big congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:57:00 AM
Nice Andrea, love the first line. Obviously an older write but it fits perfectly for this contest. Did you revise it?
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:51:00 AM
This was such fun to read, Andrea...well done.
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations. Excellent poem.
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:09:00 PM
Andrea, you had a great conversation with your younger self. Congratulations on your 2nd place.Thanks for participating in my contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/7/2015 4:24:00 PM
Andrea, nice win. SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2015 3:53:00 PM
WOW! Congrats on your well deserved win!! Be blessed -LU
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Date: 11/7/2015 3:49:00 PM
many congrats on your win Andrea :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2013 11:59:00 PM
This was fun to learn more about you Andrea. It sounds like a fun exercise to see what you would have done differently, if you could simply have a conversation with the younger you. Loved the bits of humor splashed here and there as well. Me writing a poem to my sixteen-year-old self wouldn't have much, however (seeing how that's slightly over two years ago... haha).
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Date: 1/8/2013 4:30:00 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd
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Date: 1/6/2013 5:45:00 PM
You are still alive..if you know you should take more chances, then you should ;) Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2013 8:33:00 PM
IF only we knew how our life would have been. Great write. love phyl soup mail
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Date: 1/1/2013 2:57:00 PM
Wonderful write,Andrea....Great work..Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 1/1/2013 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:53:00 AM
Hi, my dearest poet friend! I feel great rereading your excellent entry and seeing it in the super winners' list! MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR TOP WIN! Thank you so much for everything and again, HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR! (w/soupmail) love always, Leonora
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Date: 1/1/2013 1:57:00 AM
Congrats on your big win Andrea! :D really an interesting poem Andrea, anyway happy new year! :D
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Date: 12/31/2012 5:18:00 PM
Well Done. Happy New year as well!
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:32:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea....Happy New Year
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:23:00 PM
Andrea I loved the advice about cashing in before the crash, overall it was excellent and you need to get back to Spain, well done my friend...David
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Date: 12/31/2012 3:06:00 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations and Happy New Year...,
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:55:00 PM
a wonderful poem and so deserving of your win in the contest! i love the suggestions you've made to your younger self...
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:20:00 PM
Big congrats Andrea love, love this one and all the best for the new year xx
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Date: 12/28/2012 11:16:00 AM
Great work... Love the advice. This should go far in the contest!
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