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A Late Visitor

A LATE VISITOR Sleepless, he’d taken seat In an overstuffed chair Lamp not lit, nor diversion sought, Just sitting there Worrying on about problems of day Listening for answers night wouldn’t say II I hear wheels of a horse drawn coach In London Town fog “Bring it round, you merry coachman Bring it round!” Off the avenue where I stand Hat in clouds, shoes on the ground The in between a fright and swimming round Hear? between those dock, dock sounds My shouting voice? “Bring it round, you cocksure coachman Bring it round!” III All’s quiet Snow, I’m sure, will drift to ten feet Outside the window – or more Old downy dog’s acurl in a corner When I’m off he’ll choose the rocker The feeling’s like one preceding A mystic midnight meeting Of spider and fly Or mice in a breadbox, eating All’s quiet all’s well And the old clock’s ticking…ticking… ticking…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/2/2012 2:45:00 AM
That's it Daver.." This is too reminds me too much of to many winters!! So I shall book to sunnier climes..)
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:15:00 AM
Quite a vintage story here well told. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/25/2012 5:45:00 AM
An amazing write, Daver! It almost feels like an astral voyage where time and place are of no consequence. Small details are the greater part of the whole! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:51:00 PM
it sounds very quaint, like something from Charles Dickens' time!! Enjoyed this!
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:53:00 AM
Sounds like an evening of peace and comfort after the outside activity calms down. The dog and other critters give me a feeling of contentment as I sit there too. Just wondering, do we have a fire? Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 5/19/2012 5:13:00 PM
Daver, you are a brilliant poet.....like this alot, very well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/19/2012 1:43:00 PM
These are all very well written, Daver. My favorite is the second one. It made me think of the way Emily Dickinson had the coachman "Death" come to carry her home in "Because I Could Not Stop for Death." Very cool the way you keep the ticking going at the end of the third verse. How I wish I could by "acurl" in the corner with tht old downy dog. I LOVE SNOW. Love, carolyn
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