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A Lake of Autumn Solitude

Beneath the autumn trees I lie The leaves drift down around my head I'll hear the sound of wild geese fly And dream, I will, upon my bed As the golden sun of summer fades And the leaves are turning scarlet red The world becomes a bright cascade With Persian rugs of leaves to spread The pond is edged with twigs, and sodden leaves The odors of the earth, green moss and peat The roots of quiet trees and rotting logs The crumbling bank where cattails wash their feet Where tiny minnows dart with lightning speed Among the roots where wild ducks come to feed The very core and essence of the earth Born of melted snow, and sleet and rain Of birds who roost amid the tree tops high And breathe the wholesome fragrance of the sky Trees that sway and swoon along the bank Shedding leaves of amber, rust and gold Like ashes left from burning autumn dreams To listen, standing guard on either flank O'er twig and stone, with watchful eyes so keen While shading coves where angler poles have been Across it's face, a restless ripple seen Where tangled grass and weeping willows lean Upon the shores where struggles soon will cease This place to spend in nature's splendid peace 8/17/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/9/2013 3:34:00 PM
Very good rhythm! For the greater part, these words flow effortlessly off the tongue, in measured cadence. My congratulations. Good subject as well.
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Date: 9/6/2012 12:24:00 AM
Beautiful write! I could smell the crisp honey suckle breeze and hear the geese.
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:59:00 PM
A wonderful seasonal write with great descriptiveness and rhyming. Good work as usual Carrie.
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Date: 8/20/2012 5:55:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..So much like a very peaceful place to spent a little time..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2012 10:01:00 PM
Hmm, an enchanting spot you've sketched here. Nice autumn story in flowing rhyme. Well done, Carrie. :)
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:40:00 AM
You nailed it, Carrie! Jimbo .
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:36:00 PM
Solitude in its soothing colors appears to be showering its golden drops of Autumn Carrie in this sweet write. You have sketched a very alluring and enchanting scene in this beautiful write my friend. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...
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