A January Day Dawns

nine o' clock,on a sky deep azure blue the night watchman nods a morning adieu

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Michael Torres

Date: 1/3/2009 9:46:00 AM

Full of tranquility and peace. Thanks for the feeling Brian. GBU Michael

P Sheart

Date: 1/2/2009 2:37:00 PM

Hello Brian Ahhhh, I love the imagery in this one. A great way for the night watchmnan to start his day! A great way to start off the New Year! Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/2/2009 6:36:00 AM

Only you would think of someone else's view on the beginning of a beautiful day. It must be a lonely job, and oh to miss the beautiful day. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/2/2009 4:18:00 AM

Beautiful image, Brian - gorgeous way to wake up! Love, Kristin

Laurie Ginn

Date: 1/2/2009 2:25:00 AM

Ahhh simplicity at it's finest....very, very nice. Laurie