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A Hurricane With An Eye of Pain

A force so hard And colder than cold No matter how you guard It'll make a building fold You can try to run You can try to hide There'll be no sun You'll go down with the tide The eye is suppose to be calm But this one is full of rain You can try to recite a psalm But you'll only feel pain No one can save you now It's time to feel the hurt Take your last bow And fall to the dirt The anger you couldn't contain Has caused you endless rain This isn't a normal hurricane It's filled with pain Written on August 3, 2012

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Date: 9/4/2012 6:22:00 PM
Oooo... I can feel it... Terry (nice poem)
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Date: 9/4/2012 3:45:00 PM
sounds rough....hope you are well. keep the soup flowing with poetry.
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