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A Hurricane with an Eye of Pain

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A Hurricane with an Eye of Pain

A force so hard
And colder than cold
No matter how you guard
It'll make a building fold

You can try to run
You can try to hide
There'll be no sun
You'll go down with the tide

The eye is suppose to be calm
But this one is full of rain
You can try to recite a psalm
But you'll only feel pain

No one can save you now
It's time to feel the hurt
Take your last bow
And fall to the dirt

The anger you couldn't contain
Has caused you endless rain
This isn't a normal hurricane
It's filled with pain

Written on August 3, 2012

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:22:00 PM
    Oooo... I can feel it... Terry (nice poem)

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:48:00 PM
    Poignant feelings penned Lily,your poetry shows a quiet strength and a resolve to letting go, wonderful sharing, hugs vie

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:45:00 PM
    sounds rough....hope you are well. keep the soup flowing with poetry.