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A Hue of Heaven

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A Hue of Heaven

Above lime trees, below the lemon sun
The bees and birds bathe in the skies lagoon
Of this fine hour I gaze what has begun
To me to be the quiet birth of noon
In symphony with natures harp and tune

A hue of heaven brushed above the air
Of sacred ether and omniscient flare
Baptising wings where-in horizons dew
With eyes as feet that step to stair, I stare
Awestruck anew a splendour of a view

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  1. Date: 10/31/2011 10:24:00 PM
    You make everything so special, a flare with words that gives the reader all they need. Love the descriptions "lemon sun" "baptising wings" delicious descriptions. Luv, Eliz

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 4:06:00 PM
    this is a beautiful rendition of quite a challenging form, love the 'lime trees' and the 'lemon sun'...thanks for your kind comments on my work, I think we've met on here before, I seem to remember exchanging comments :-)

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 10:06:00 PM
    Johnny, these dizain are quite like sonnets, aren't they? This is so pretty and sonnet like. I think I will just look over all my old sonnets and find some lines to use in a dizain!! Hey, thanks for your sweet comments the other day. I want to comment back to everyone I missed yesterday. Couldn't do Soup at all. Wish I had more time! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 7:32:00 PM
    Can I be there with you? It sounds so lovely!

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 3:26:00 AM
    lovely, thanks

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 2:10:00 AM
    This is really beautiful Johnny, took me away to another place ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 7:41:00 PM
    this is lovely.keep it up.