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A Hearts Confession

In my eyes you are perfect, my eyes may be clouded with love this is true but if this be the case let me live blind. For you are the sun that shines, the stars that twinkle and the flowers that thus are sweet. You are the fire that’s chasing my heart, and the cage that’s keeping it in place. We found each other this is true but from the moment I found you I found the truest love and the other half of me, which was, is and always will be you. I will love you in the days and nights ahead, you will be my everything, that I can declare to you. You are the purest of hearts and the strongest of minds so I give myself to you with the truest of true words that have ever leaked these lips. I’m yours now and forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 3:29:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Aimee. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful poem to a loved one, a joy to read Aimee ~ a warm welcome to the Soup >> James :)
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Date: 11/26/2010 8:41:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight... hope your time on the Soup will be fun and fantastic.. check out the contests.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:35:00 PM
Very touching declaration of love. I don't think I can offer you anything constructive. Very simply put, and very heartfelt.
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