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A Freestyle Spur of the Moment Thing

Dazed n confused Not knowing how to help if its not spoken of too Expressing is like a suggestion of how deep its roots Dazed n confused Not knowing how to help if rooted out too Just feeling bruised n stripped arms split blood drips n thrown in a hole left to the wolves Knowing better tho Just mentioning the motion of emotions felt while being being bum-rushed by scars that were produced Silently roaring the proof Dazed n confused A lil gesture of consideration returned n provoked concern Dazed n confused Thoughts of smothering n tryin too hard put aside for questions of relevance that are shown why they are yurned What's the answer in return Nothin Dazed n confused Wearing fortified gear ready for anything anyone or something Dazed n confused Not ever ready to give up just not knowing what to do...Peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 11:16:00 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Eddie. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:06:00 AM
This is a very attention grabbing piece, though a little scattered and, for lack of a better word, confusing.
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