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A Fool's Love

Will God, in all his grace, give me the chance? Or will my words fall from my mouth, unheard By all except for me, alone by choice? I have to view time passed a test, for if I saw the Lady, split with guts and gold, At work, my soul would die, my mind would cease. So fickle in her works of luck, with ease She turns the tides of love and wars of old, She toys with men until with grief they're stiff. This jealousy aroused my darkest side. I pray that God will let me be with her, And also plead that friends of mine be spared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/17/2009 1:47:00 PM
This is such an excellent poem. It flow with such grace and reverence. I really like the essence of the piece and the praise it brings. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 12/3/2008 6:42:00 PM
I love your poem!! Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!!! Love Alexz ^_^
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Date: 7/29/2008 2:19:00 PM
I gave a response to this poem in poem form. Check it out. One of my poems. "Response to A Fool's Love"
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Date: 7/29/2008 2:15:00 PM
Nice story. Poem thing. But I think that this is something that is really a prominent issue with many people. They just don't have the moral to care one way or another. So they don't really get it.
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Date: 7/26/2008 4:25:00 AM
Hi Arron - Interesting poetry - liked the flow and story - Blessings
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