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A Flame Once Burned

All I had to do was love her with all my heart and it would be OK. I clung to her to save her life, as she wriggled. Love, a propped up cardboard cutout, Trust, her whipping boy Hope, a bloodied and bruised up mess, with its eyes swollen shut. A flame once burned, my ray of hope; and she placed it beneath her spoon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2016 1:59:00 PM
This is SO beautiful. I really appreciate that you put your pain on paper and share it with the world. It's not easy being brave
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Date: 10/10/2013 9:11:00 AM
This is a very sad and painful write. Full of sorrow and anguish.
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Date: 12/7/2012 1:33:00 AM
Hmmmm? This one really has me thinking? It's so sad,and painful...
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Luke Irwin
Date: 12/7/2012 9:02:00 PM
Painful indeed. Thanks for reading.

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