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A Fiery Feeling

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A Fiery Feeling

A fiery feeling potent to lock my lips
came in waves of atomic, silent scream;
as his vocal cloud decends, my sky drips.

A twist of sagacity and daydream
reverberates where passion lived and died
...we now reside ashore a bitter stream.

Love is lost, shadows of hatred betide,
this near death cannot kill what cannot die;
my hope swirls beyond the unfolding tide.

On a twilight, I raised a holy cry,
asking God to make the rare rainbow ring
again before the burning candles die.

Once upon a dawn, I felt his warm arms
burnish my skin and replaced my alarm.

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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 2:03:00 PM
    Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Thank you for this winning entry into my contest!!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 8:52:00 PM
    You've poured deep feelings into these few lines. Congratulations. Nice to find you here. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:05:00 PM
    congratulations... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 4:38:00 PM
    a passionate write, Adeleke. Big congrats to you in this contest. It was not an easy thing to accomplish and you deserve the honor.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 10:46:00 AM
    goose bumps..