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A Fiery Feeling

A fiery feeling potent to lock my lips came in waves of atomic, silent scream; as his vocal cloud decends, my sky drips. A twist of sagacity and daydream reverberates where passion lived and died ...we now reside ashore a bitter stream. Love is lost, shadows of hatred betide, this near death cannot kill what cannot die; my hope swirls beyond the unfolding tide. On a twilight, I raised a holy cry, asking God to make the rare rainbow ring again before the burning candles die. Once upon a dawn, I felt his warm arms burnish my skin and replaced my alarm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/11/2013 2:03:00 PM
Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2013 8:52:00 PM
You've poured deep feelings into these few lines. Congratulations. Nice to find you here. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:05:00 PM
congratulations... SKAT
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Date: 8/9/2013 4:38:00 PM
a passionate write, Adeleke. Big congrats to you in this contest. It was not an easy thing to accomplish and you deserve the honor.
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Date: 7/16/2013 10:46:00 AM
goose bumps..
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