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A Few Minutes

Out on the porch in freezing cold Listening to the birds sing See them sit with feathers fluffed up Enduring what cold brings "Spring, spring", they sing, "soon will be here". I can't believe their song The roosters sing back, "cock-a-doodle-do". Their voices are so strong Boredom flew right up in the clouds It enjoys the swift ride The cold north wind blows, rustles leaves Imagination glides

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Chukwuemeka Mbah

Date: 1/23/2013 11:20:00 AM

pun meets alliteration. wonderful piece. please tell me what inspired this poem?

Carl Fraser

Date: 1/21/2013 6:13:00 AM

Guess im part bird Sara, can hardly wait for spring, very nice write, blessings, Carl

Sharon Smith

Date: 1/20/2013 2:25:00 PM

I wish the birds round here were calling that spring was almost here. This morning the Magpie at my window seemed to be saying "Let me in, it's freezing out here!"

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/20/2013 2:02:00 PM

Awesome job, Sara. You are a very observant lady! So enjoyed!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/20/2013 1:47:00 PM

A lovely write, Sara! I enjoyed it! Love, Kim

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/20/2013 8:39:00 AM

Lovely, Sara! Nature reveals the glory of God and displays His handiwork! It communicates His love to us! :) Hugs!

Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 1/20/2013 8:09:00 AM

longing for spring...count me in too....it will be here soon....:))

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/20/2013 7:27:00 AM

I see it and hear it...awaiting spring and warmer weather !! Such a lovely poem ....

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/20/2013 7:24:00 AM

You found your creative jibe again my friend, and I love it too! You came back to the ole dependable front porch! I don't blame you, it's such a big inspirational place for you, if that's what you need to spark your imagination then do it! It's just way too cold for me on my front porch! It's 25 degrees out right now, burrrr! This is such a brilliant write Sara! I loved reading it this morning! Great Work!!