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A Feral Creature Called ''Love''

crushed, wrecked, and shook like a ceramic doll I fall headlong and deep, deep into the violent stream of fear--fear that flows, flows like a hurried river into the tributaries of my fearful heart which trembles and quakes at the watery inundations of its rippled waves; flooded and overflowed with fears and unmoved by promises that deceive with a caress I take refuge and secret repose in a thing more wild, in a thing more bloodthirsty,-- a feral creature called "love," whose kiss is a fatal bite!

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Date: 3/1/2014 6:05:00 PM
Outstanding piece, Ngoc. The description of love, as a new creature to challenge your space, is deeply expressed in this poem. Amazing imagery, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems,might find some you like. Peace.
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