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A Duty To Confess

. The varlet yes they say I am a varmint one who would be the variegator at the site of hern bloom To specify I am compelled to aver there is no control of the varix of mine loom

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2012 8:10:00 AM

I must say that you have a broad vocabulary or did some very intense research to find these words to write a subtile, oh, I mean subtle(meaning delicate or demure meaning) work..I don't think that you are a varmit just a human under control I hope..Sara

James Peranteau
Date: 12/10/2023 10:31:00 AM

i owe the many here on the Soup, for the know; to press forward...intense research creates the astute literary artist dear poet ;) much love, james

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/9/2012 8:12:00 AM

James, Thanks for stopping by..Yes, the threat that we once lived under slowly disappeared but after the 911 incident of a few years ago now stays at the back of my mind..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/7/2012 7:39:00 PM

I confess dear James that in your varmint state you do manage to instill some mystery and questions that I would like answers to; but you are there, I am here and the subject is much too complex to solve in this little space, so your loom will have to weave what I need to know! Love, Lizzie

Daver Austin

Date: 6/6/2012 2:28:00 PM

You have woven a mystery, dear Sir James. Is the Varix a part of a loom? No matter. You, as usual, have little control in matters of this sort, but must constantly offer apology for what, for you, comes so naturally. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/6/2012 11:49:00 AM

smart kinda poetry, james... fascinating with greeeat ending..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2012 10:38:00 PM

I don't know why but parts of this reminded me of Dr. Seuss! the varix of mine loom. Such an unusual way you have with words, my friend! A fun read.

James Peranteau
Date: 2/5/2024 3:46:00 PM

lol...i pray not ')