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A Drop of Water

A Drop of Water I look up into the deep sky And the clouds as purple as a bruise growl at the dry, crumbling earth with condescending looks they know that it yearns for the nourishment they carry in their bloated bellies I inhale the damp air twirling and grinning as if I can see the hesitant drops bracing themselves for the free fall And the first drop hits the very tip-top of my nose I laugh because I can hear the thirsty soil slurping up the water in its agitation to sate its parched throat The tiger lilies behave a bit more civilly they sip the refreshment daintily gathering the gentle drops in a necklace of crystal beads ever so prettily they bask in the warm shower savoring the clean liquid flowing through them Proud pines fill up their wooden mugs with the clouds’ precious gift letting the stream trickle down their sides but they remain unbending too full of hubris to admit their gratitude though they stare up at the sky with unspoken respect Me, I just stand perfectly still breathing in wet grass and proud pines and refined tiger lilies feeling the water streak through my hair and listening raptly to the symphony of the tap dancing rain playing across the weather-beaten pavement

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 8:34:00 PM
C Flowers,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 5/9/2012 12:47:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Meredith. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:52:00 AM
Very good imagination in this poem.Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:50:00 PM
I am still enjoyuing the images you gave me with this poem. Thank you.
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Date: 2/19/2012 5:02:00 PM
A beautifully-worded stroll through your mind. Thank you!
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Date: 2/17/2012 4:16:00 PM
This is like a painting on canvas with words. Very well written.
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Date: 2/17/2012 3:46:00 PM
You are up to the sky you to Meredith,lovely poem.Tank you for reading my poem today.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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